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When I read this, I saw so much more than what the meanings reveal.
The chosen words
The style
Your technique.
I’d like to see what you can do with what outcome you would prefer in a contrast to this literature you have submitted.
As a suggestion I would recommend listening to ‘The Great Demise’ by Soilwork, they go hand in hand like tomato and basil, they’re great on their own but together? Delicias!
Very good!